#99053# lingu review

1 files changed, 16 insertions, 17 deletions

diff --git a/odk/index.html b/odk/index.html
index ff5f7ab91548..f04c31fbe4b5 100644
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@@ -70,19 +70,19 @@
       <table width="100%" border="0" cellpadding="5">
         <tr>
           <td>
-            <P>[PRODUCTNAME] software is a complete, feature-rich office productivity product, that 
-               provides in combination with this SDK all the essential tools for building and deploying 
-               custom solutions to build on, or integrate with, the [PRODUCTNAME] suite of products.
+            <P>[PRODUCTNAME] software is a complete, feature-rich office productivity product that 
+               provides, in combination with this SDK, all the essential tools for building and deploying 
+               custom solutions that build on, or integrate with, the [PRODUCTNAME] suite of products.
             </p>
-            <p>The SDK is a development kit for [PRODUCTNAME], which shall ease the development 
+            <p>The SDK is a development kit for [PRODUCTNAME], which eases the development 
                of office components. It provides a set of libraries, binaries, header, and idl files 
-               which have final API's and can only be extend with new functionality. This set of 
-               libraries and binaries are a minimum set of functions to use system abstraction for 
+               which have final API's and can only be extended with new functionality. This set of 
+               libraries and binaries is the minimum set of functions needed to use system abstraction for 
                base functionality and for using UNO (Universal Network Objects) component technology. 
-               The UNO component model is the base of the whole Office API. The SDK provides all the 
-               stuff which is necessary to use the Office API from external programs (e.g. Java, C++) 
+               The UNO component model is the base of the whole Office API. The SDK provides everything 
+               necessary to use the Office API from external programs (e.g. Java, C++) 
                or to extend the Office functionality with new components (e.g. new filter components, 
-               CalcAddin functions) and that compatible over several version because the API remains 
+               CalcAddin functions).  It is compatible over several versions because the API remains 
                unaffected and will only be extended with new functions.</P>
             <p>The SDK provides the basic building blocks for external developers to develop components in 
                any language for which a binding exists. Currently, there are language bindings for 
@@ -90,11 +90,11 @@
                [PRODUCTNAME], thus covering the two most commonly used programming languages. There 
                will be no limit for office automation in heterogeneous environments. Currently supported
                platforms of the SDK are Linux, Solaris (sparc), and Windows.</p>
-            <P>Furthermore the SDK contains <a href="docs/common/ref/com/sun/star/module-ix.html">
+            <P>The SDK also contains <a href="docs/common/ref/com/sun/star/module-ix.html">
                reference</a> documentation for the API and a complete 
-               <a href="docs/Developersguide_intro.html">Developers Guide</a>, with lots of examples, 
-               which shall introduce the API, explain the concepts behind it, and makes it possible for 
-               all users to getting started and make their own first steps with the Office API quickly.
+               <a href="docs/Developersguide_intro.html">Developer's Guide</a>, with lots of examples, 
+               which introduce the API, explain the concepts behind it, and make it possible for 
+               all users to quickly get started with the Office API.
                </P>
             <hr>
             <table width="100%" border="0" cellpadding="4">
@@ -115,10 +115,10 @@
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               <tr>
                 <td width=30%>
-                  <font size="3"><a href="docs/developersguide_intro.html">Developers Guide</a></font>
+                  <font size="3"><a href="docs/developersguide_intro.html">Developer's Guide</a></font>
                 </td>
                 <td width=70%>
-                  Detailed documentation, explaining the [PRODUCTNAME] API and the concepts behind it 
+                  Detailed documentation, explaining the [PRODUCTNAME] API and the concepts behind it, 
                   with a rich set of examples, implemented mainly in Java.
                 </td>
               </tr> 	      
@@ -263,8 +263,7 @@
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     <td colspan="3">
-      <p align=center><font size=2><b>Copyright 2002 Sun Microsystems,
-        Inc., 901 San Antonio Road, Palo Alto, CA 94303 USA.</b></font>
+      <p align=center><font size=2><b>Copyright 2003 Sun Microsystems, Inc.</b></font>
       </p>
       &nbsp
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